Just out of curiosity, do you plan on continuing this story? Cause there are reviews for chapter 3, but I only see one...please continue. This is so awesome.

cheri

It's me again.
Weren't there more chapters before? Something about his friends and his sister and he sold some crappy gaget to this guy and he demanded a refund, a laptop or something? Maybe I'm wrong...wrong story? well, if I'm right, it means I have a kick-ass memory.

Reasons Why You Should Continue This Story:

1. This story kicks ass

2. There's no other story on fictionPress that is like yours

3. You haven't updated in a little over two years...

4. You already have over a hundred reviews from people begging you to update

5. Just think of all the girls in the world reading your story and not crying on strangers' shoulders

6. No body likes it when a story captures their attention but the author is flighty

7. I really, really like your story :D

so... kudos for the good start :) update?

haha so i read this anyway even though it said on hold...i really liked it though.
wow what an asshole this fellow is. lol.
kharma...

Wow. I really like this.
I really would love to see more of this.
But, um, seeing how it's been a while since you updated, I don't know.
But, if you every do, I will definitely read this!
It's really interesting.

-Rachel

This was funny and sexy (dunno how you did that, though) and really smooth.
It was like a James Bond novel, except he ain't an agent. ;) I just loved it to bits!
"It was just business." Brilliant.

I really hope there's more, it'd be a shame if we didn't get to see more of Jay.

Wow. This reminds me of the newspaper article I once read on guys who supported their families and owned bungalow houses just by snatching women's handbags off them in the street.

haha i like, hope you continue this sounds like it has some great potential.

Aww poor kid, doesn't know what he got himself into ^^
love your story

aww...poor SCott...I hope you update soon!!

o0o, she knows where they live

Rude guy..it'd be funny if they met again

haha. amazingly funny :)

aw this is really good! i look forward to the rest.

haha and here i was thinking he pulled out a vibrator or some shit...