|Reviews for Smooth|
| nighthuntress05 2/27/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I especially love the line "shave
you till you’re pure and fit my
| frailty 12/2/06 . chapter 1
"i bloom like rancid roses
all across your back" I love love love this line... beautiful...
| die kleine maus 9/29/06 . chapter 1
"in the shower i dominate", i like that. Have you ever read "The PowerBook" by Jeannette Winterson? I think you'd love it.
| Emiley 9/29/06 . chapter 1
I like the way you write, I love you use of words :) a little rude for me maybe, but I still like it
| elegiac lies 9/16/06 . chapter 1
just, wow.i like it alot.
| realityescapesher 9/13/06 . chapter 1
i LOVE "i bloom like rancid roses/all across your back" and "the vodka fucks my throat hard." because that's such a perfect image for vodka. and i also love the child safety scissors reference. very cool.
-alyps thanks for the review. you pretty much made my world.
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 9/13/06 . chapter 1
Damn...very high-strong poem you've got here. Love your metaphors and wordings. The momentum of this is like a fully-loaded machine gun on a steam roller, it just keeps on coming and it hits you hard.
| This Modern Love 9/7/06 . chapter 1
sensual, metaphorical. wow. amazingly lustful.
| Countess Chocula 9/7/06 . chapter 1
Wow. I don't really know what to say but...wow...