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Limited Edition 2006-11-03 . chapter 1
Heheh like this yes yes. Recognize it I guess. Or rather, recognize myself in this.
Arctic Kurai 2006-09-11 . chapter 1
Yes, it's me.

Wow, this is totally better than what I write. O_o now here you go, making me feel bad. And yes, I thought this had a sense of direction!

And I also love the length! Because, as you know, I prefer short stories over long...long, long ones.

Hehe, and I laughed at the person when s/he said: "Imaginary friend." XD That reminds me of myself when I was a kid.

FOMFG, I'm rambling! -adds to favs-

~ASK~
brava to the kitten 2006-09-07 . chapter 1
it doesn't have to go anywhere. i liked this... it was short but... it needed to be short. i liked the whole idea of the narrator being so much more attracted to her because he didn't know who she was. i think that's really true, in most cases. we don't see their flaws, we don't feel responsible if something goes wrong... it's a bit twisted isn't it? but you captured the idea well. nicely done.
In the Rye 2006-09-07 . chapter 1
the idea is good, but it needs more development. and the "you know?" just got too redundant.
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