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| summerbee 2007-02-25 ch 1,  | abusei have to say that the first is my favorite. the intense, vivid detail just gives such a clear picture. the others feel more like small observations, cynical and a little sad. |
| ossining 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseOh, beautiful. Simple and so focused on details that it just makes the piece come to life. Nice work. Keep writing! :) |
| citrus scented 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abusethis is simply beautiful. its such a haunting image, wow...really vivid and striking description. It just leaps out of you..and I can see her...wow. |
| r0x0r j00 b0x0r5 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abusegood stuff...keep writing |
| method acting 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuseor maybe she was filled to the brim! |
| InkandIntrospection 2006-09-22 ch 3, | abuseAmazing. I particularly love the first one; the description of the eyes really gets your attention. Just generally beautiful use of language. Oh, and thanks for your review on my new poem. Just for the record, a niente is the point of a decrescendo where it becomes so quiet the sound literally stops because the vocal chords stop vibrating. I'm such a singing nerd. *Blushes* |
| fairytale failure 2006-09-18 ch 3, | abuseSomething in your writing reminds me of Peter Oliva's book The City of Yes...I don't know, but "he was drunk on piano playing" just sounds like something you would write. And also, I based one of my poems on your style...don't know how it turned out though :S it just came like that. (haha! maybe I read too much.) And now I'll shut up, but that first chapter is one of the best things you've written. |
| agirlnamed-aly 2006-09-17 ch 3, | abuseSuch bitter honesty and resentment. Great use of words especially. Can't wait to see more. |
| ode to a firefly 2006-09-11 ch 2, | abuseI liked the first one better, but they're both really quite good. It's like taking a picture of the scenario, only with words instead of film. Short little pieces like this are fun to write. =) I'll be interested in reading more. ♥Christine |
| smile persephone 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseImagery-intense and beautiful from beginning to end. It can allude to so much, so little, and everything in between. Lovely work, simply gorgeous. |
| elvenstorm 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseWow that was stunning. Beautiful images all the way through and love the whole makeup thing as normally that's kind of used to emphasise beauty. Well done! |