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| Shasta Valentine 2008-04-06 ch 1, | i'm trying REALLY hard to give you constructive critisism becuase i truly hate it when people review my poems and just tell me their good. but dang girl. these are really good. and i have no critisism for you. keep writing! -sv |
| Susurrus 2006-10-27 ch 1, | This is great! I'm especially attracted to the middle stanza, it really rings out...Keep it up! Susurrus |
| Frore 2006-09-28 ch 1, | The more I read your poetry, the less critical remarks I have to make (and thank you for returning the review, and further more, not biting my head off for my nitpicks. So many fictionpress writers do that!). Your rhyme scheme holds together and the speech flows. Not bad writing at all. |
| Kissan Silma 2006-09-13 ch 1, | Beautiful work...is this about Gaz? |