It was a good story but left me with one burning question. Why is grandma going to hell? It just gave me a weird picture of two dudes and an old lady, and yeah, not going to finish that. Still, a good story with a good middle, and a good/funny ending.

Awesome job...beautifully written.

This story is sweet, and it's full of unspoken emotions. It's moving.
You did great!

i LIKED this one. I read that recent halloween one, but this one totally! tops that. It was colio. haha. good job! your english was much better, too. ^_^ Ciao!

aw...i like it lots and lots. it's...i don't know...but i like it very much...

i liked the details you put in this; they really make up a lot of the scene that i'm playing in my mind, which is great. i've never really read an incest story before, but this is good. nice work(: