I love this poem.

I don't think there's more I want to say than that.

Grammatical inconsistencies and incorrectness are peppered throughout, but it doesn't matter; there's a powerful message here. I like it. A lot.

u see, u cn look at things deeply, very deeply, profoundly...most deeply among all ppl I've met so far..I'm not even close to you in terms of that penetrating depth...that's what makes this poem n all ur other works so amazing...but, ur really short of looking at things widely, and looking at things far...it's like u keep digging abysmal tunnel within urself without spreading out the hole or canvassing what's ahead...deep, wide, and far approach to life might be one of the keys to more happiness, so long, peace