I was wondering when you're going to update?

i still love all of this. she's not antisocial, she just has a hard time relating is all. the style is different and the way Sophie is developing around her environment... i feel it's right. Are the bruises gone? Will she eventually feel whole?? it's so strong and emotional... great work! Keep writing, preciosa!

I love the nursery rhyme. Oh my god, YES.

I really enjoy your descriptions (i.e. "only and English teacher could pronounce punctuation) and your lack of the typical teenage angst that makes those who have already passed through it wince and stop reading. I guess what I'm trying to say is that your character is very blunt/frank instead of self-pitying and it's refreshing. Update soon?

I was wondering when you're going to update?

I -- wow don't really know where to start. Just in two chapters you have managed to make me care so much for Sophie. Each of the characters have so much personality, the teachers, the students, except maybe Drew. Compared to the other characters, he is a bit bland.

Sophie's relationship with her father? Other stories just throw the child abuse at your face and the characters are constantly angsting about it. I love (and hate) how Sophie treats it -- like its just a normal part of a normal life.

The slash fangirl in my squealed at Alex and Nick but Sophie just took over and wow. And the way she is becoming friendlier with the little group..yeah, I hope you choose to continue this story.

your writing style is extremely witty and sarcastic. i love this story. :]

I really love this.

That's so sad and beautiful. It feels very realistic, as I read it. I absolutely love your writing.

sorry im writing under your story, i don't know if there is a way to msg on this site, im kind of new to it. but thank you, i feel stupid, lol, i wasn't completley sure, but my spell check didn't pick it up, and i looked it up and low and behold you were right, and my spell check was wrong, stupid computer, lol. well thanks again.

So I'm thinking Georgie Porgie is either her dad or her ex-boyfriend. I'm leaning towards her dad.

Feedback, maybe?

I loved this, by the way.

this is very interesting, angsty off course, but a part of it completely pulls me towards the center of how confused, alone and out of place she feels.

i really liked the work, the style, and its cleanliness was certainly a great thing and i loved it.