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| heresyisforlosers 2006-12-11 ch 1, | abusehaha. that's cute. true and cute. |
| Mother Nature's Daughter 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abusethat ws pretty funny, I enjoyed reading about the girl's POV where everything went wrong starting at ruining three different pairs of pants. That was hilariuos, And the the boy, 4geting about it up until ten minutes and not showering and havig to buy shoestrings...wow...that was hilariuos i really enjoyed it! :) |
| Floetic-Soul310 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseThat's what happens when people are fogretful. XD |
| Torrinth 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseHa, wow, I'm not sure which sex this is more derrogatory to! The girl, it seems to me. Very persnickity. Personally, I give the guy props for buying the shoelaces, though it's almost cancelled out by the lack of shower... Nice job, I liked the funny. Loved the comparison. |