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AndAliceSays 2007-01-24 . chapter 1
i think there's a typo in here, did you mean physical or am i just misinterpreting?

This poem's very frank, and i understand the fact that you're addressing someone, but it almost seems too.. hmm.. simply personal? to be poetry. i don't know how to put it, sorry.
sneaky_weasel 2006-09-22 . chapter 1
im sure she will hun. you never know what can happen unless you go for it.
Inu-midoriko 2006-09-15 . chapter 1
great ob on this.
ShadowFane 2006-09-08 . chapter 1
I liked this. I can totally relate to it right now. Great job!

SF
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