Reviews for the horrible and fleeting facts of life

Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1,	abuseGood poem. Yes, life moves by too fast. ~Twilight Starr~
notthecreepyfatguy 2006-10-03 ch 1,	abuseI wish I was five again...good poem, I really like the ending line.m
fairytale failure 2006-09-17 ch 1,	abuse"And it snowed with incredible warmth." --> that's good!
citrus scented 2006-09-10 ch 1,	abusesixteen gaah that was freaky birthday. its like, ** im actually growing up. this is the i was named... i never thought of it like that. again i love your format. oh i love finding new and differnt approaches and style to poetry like this. preeschol baby blues...love that, ought to be some song. "the door opens and shuts" beautiful imagery. wow.
mercury.love 2006-09-09 ch 1,	abuseI love it. I relate to it -- this is EXACTLY how I felt when I turned sixteen and how I feel everyday I get older. I still feel 10. The third stanza is cute in some odd rhyme-y way. I like your writing style.