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| Isca 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the structure of the lines (i.e. places, spaces, faces). "Give in." A simple line; full of pain. :) |
| nimue webweaver 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseSimply beautiful. |
| tuieri 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseare you sure 'tisn't a song? i like "The deep has no memory/The dark knows no sin" |
| Stary Dynamo 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abusewow, very powerful. i can deffinately relate to what this is saying, the feeling that you have to hide some things so no one else can see what's really going on. awesome job, man, welcome back :) |