Reviews for Blood, the Crimson River

dark falco3000
2006-12-03
ch 1,

abuseTo slitwristremix:
That's alex for you. Believe me, he's one of my best friends. If he needs to fight, he will do so, and he's very good at it. However that doesn't stop him from being the, as you said, "Drama queen who gets beat and picked on". If this combination seems impossible, well then Alex must just defy all logic.

To Alex:
I remember this poem... you wrote it at the start of last year didn't you? Jeez almost 2 years ago. I'm pretty sure that this is what got me into writing my poetry. Heh, you just keep helping me out don't you? I'd thank you but... no, that's not gonna happen.

Reborn As I
2006-09-09
ch 1,

abusedude, i gotta say, i don't like your writing. but that's ok. i mean, to each his own, right? however, if you're finding that your work isn't well recieved in general, it might be because you come across as a hollow lie. i mean, you can't be a chuck norris type super hero AND a victim. you're writing just doesn't ring true. even the fantastical stuff. so what are you? the pathetic drama queen who gets beat and picked on, only to go home and slit his wrists, or the multi-oponent bashing, nose breaking, dark lord of the sith type, sword weilding superman-anitchrist?

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