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| shake.and.burn 2006-09-08 ch 1,  | abuseI like I like |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-09-08 ch 1, | abuseThis by far has to be one of my favourite poems by you and I feel like I'm being mean when I tell you that I found spelling and grammar mistakes in your lovely poem. I will list them out for you so you can fix them. 1. it's "ran" not "runned"; runned is not a word 2."when'd" is not a contraction and I'm not really sure what you were trying to say there 3.it's spelled "disease" not "disiese" 4.I'm still wondering why this line says cat, "Others I cat with certanty I’m out of control" 5.it's spelled "remember" 6.it's "through" not "threw"; be careful mixing up words that sound the same but are spelled differently 7.don't forget that if a word begins with a vowel that you put "an" in front of it, not "a" Sorry if you find me annoying now that I've told you all of those corrections but it hurts me when I see a poem that is very well written in its emotions and messages but contains a lot of spelling and grammar mistaking. Please don't think that I'm being mean about your poem because I'm not, I really like it but I would like it even better without the mistakes. Tare care and consider what I have said to you. EB |