I really like this poem. I am very fond of your rhyme scheme also, and how you have managed to make it flow so easily. Though you've used punctuation in a really good way, I'm glad you haven't really included full stops - as if Fate is ongoing, and so are your thoughts. My only remark would be this line: I’ve too been grabbed, twisted, and thrown. I would advise taking out the "and" as it disrupts the flow slightly, but otherwise you have come up with a lovely poem =]]

amazing. really good. wow. I didn't know talent like this existed in the 21st century.

Great imagery.

Oh, that one was fun. Daggered wings...for some reason, I couldn't see you writing something like this (kind of like how people can't see me writing horror). Anyway, I liked it.

How beautiful. :) It was interesting how you described Fate, and I loved how you said "some foreign requiem she sings." Keep writing! This was great.

Heh. I'm sorry, but I don't quite see the point. It describes her very well, I suppose. And I do like the big words. But what's the big PICTURE?Still. Not bad at ALL for your first rhyme.

I really like how you personified Fate into a character -- like an Angel of Fate. Great, great poem.