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| Kazuma.Rose 2007-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseamazing. really good. wow. I didn't know talent like this existed in the 21st century. |
| Kusje 2007-02-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat imagery. |
| Fool of Amaranthine 2006-11-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, that one was fun. Daggered wings...for some reason, I couldn't see you writing something like this (kind of like how people can't see me writing horror). Anyway, I liked it. |
| Morte d'Amour 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseHow beautiful. :) It was interesting how you described Fate, and I loved how you said "some foreign requiem she sings." Keep writing! This was great. |
| Lily Lady of Legend 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseHeh. I'm sorry, but I don't quite see the point. It describes her very well, I suppose. And I do like the big words. But what's the big PICTURE?Still. Not bad at ALL for your first rhyme. |
| Trilock 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI really like how you personified Fate into a character -- like an Angel of Fate. Great, great poem. |