This story reminded me of little children. Of their innocents and dreams and hopes. Childhood has always symbolize the most beautiful times of a person's life, and this story seemed to have that essence.
The fairy queen have all the pureness and innocence of a child, with no shame, no barriers of society, no ropes to tie her down... only the wonders of nature and the beauty of the world. But she wasn't complete... she couldn't leave as her wings didn't work and she was lonely. But the other guy fairy came, it was like a magic... the magic of love...
Lol. Maybe i'm over analysing stuff, but i think to think that this story is about the beauty of being free of human desires and restriants. It also shows the importance of love and joy... XD
Haha, i think by now you'd know that i absolutely loved it. Great job!

I love your writing style. It's so fairytale snuggle up under blanket with a flashlight and pretend there's a dragon outside your window. The beauty of your writing is in its descriptions and the honesty of the voice

The description in this piece was utterly gorgeous...beautiful, really. The metaphors/similes were amazing, and really added to the piece. For some reason, I started thinking of A Midsummer's Night Dream with relation to the gorgeous phrasing and description. Or maybe because I have to read it again for school...anyway, amazing! :)

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I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!

So nice...

That was short and sweet. I'm thinking of writing stories kinda like that but they never turn out to my liking so I don't end up putting them up. :]]

Dearest, I have to say, you're a great writer. You have serious talent and I'm looking forward to seeing your books on shelves of stores and libraries. Yes, you are that good.

I'm dying for you to update FANG, really I am! That story completely hooked me!

I'd be honored if you would Please read and reveiw my story, Chasing Princes! Thanks!

Kayla Christine

I didn't think I would like this, but I really do. I love the imagery and the descriptions and the FAIRIES! Still no mistakes that I can see. Well, apart from the slightly disturbing obsession with green hair *cough* Guiness *cough*