aw...i love happy endings. this one had me smiling way too much. i hogged the laptop all day so i cud finish it. yeh...i better stop.

they are so sweet together!

great story
loved it!

"Lucky for me, Grove too my self scolding as a Him scolding and smiled at my hasty reply" I have no idea what you mean!

There were a few other mistakes, but I really like your idea. Thanks for writing and posting.

Sebestian Bear Invisible Pervert is still a better story than this one. I'm sorry I didn't feel like reading on. Maybe it's just because SBIP is way awesome than this story and I read the former first.

Erm..this chapter is a little boring towards the end. But then, a little of family couldn't be all bad. Maybe it's just that you put it at the end of a chapter makes it kinda like no kick. It kills all the excitement to go on reading when you put a boring end to a chapter. An interesting one will hook your reader by the neck. You get my point. Sorry for the lengthy review. Bye, now.

This was a great romance, and was enjoyable to read, but i didnt enjoy it as much as SBIP, because it was too amazing, making it unrealistic. However, it was still good to read and really sweet, i would die to have what they have, so its still going on my favourites. I think to improve you would need to go into the whole adam thing in greater detail, it seemed like it was over too quickly and considering his violence, not that bigger deal, or throw in some other drama/angst, that would have us worrying over if they would make it. When reading i always thought that he was going to cheat on her, because of the past witht he drugs in which he probably wasnt celibate, but i suppose that would have been had to recover from.

Whoa this story was so amazing. :) i loved every chapter. :D good job!

this is a really good story, it's simple and sweet and didn't drag on forever... keep up the good work

Oh this was just awesome. THis whole damn story rocked. Love all your characters and it was hilarious and all good. Too damn interesting for words. Couldn't stop reading once I started. I don't know what the hell I'd do without you! Love, good luck with everything, and don't forget to include Grove's character in another story, I love him so much.

I absolutely love this fic. FINALLY! Something without a crap-load of angst, without all sorts of icky drama. Yays - and a happy ending too. Lovely ^__^.

Very good story. These are the types or stories I like to read. It had a few misspelled words but I ignored them lol. Great job.

AW!
That waz the cutest story ever.
Thank you for writing it.

haha. seems like every other high school romance story -SO FAR- i like Piercings, or Grove (nice name btw). Especially liked "You walked into that guys fist." its epic

Can't believe somebody dared to take your story and claimed it as their own. It must be aweful to find out on top of everything else you've been through. There are no excuses for this kind of actions and I'm sure you'll be notified if any of your readers comes across a sorry attempt like that so that it can be removed.

On the other hand, I wanted to ask if you're still toying with the idea of writing another high school humour/romance story. I remember you mentioning it a few months ago. I know you're busy at the moment and I love your supernatural stories to pieces but if you'd have a go at this genre again, I'd be a pleasure to read as well.