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amaryllisfaye
2008-07-22
ch 20,
abuseyou've gotta be one of my faves here on FP - you deliver every time! thank you!
Niccy
2008-07-05
ch 20,
abuseThis was a nice, feel-good story. Thanks for writing/sharing it. :)
Faith Adeline
2008-06-17
ch 20,
abuseSo, yea, you totally wrote this story a year ago, but I loved it haha. Very good read. Grove is. . .amazing. I want a Grove lol. Great job, I'll definitely be checking out some more of your works :)
Faith
instantvoodo
2008-06-16
ch 2,
abuseNice so far.
J.C. Lyn
2008-06-14
ch 20,
abuseNice story.
Duuude
2008-06-08
ch 20,
abuseOMGSH. This story is so sweet and beautiful. I love Grove. Seriously. He's like the perfect boyfriend in the world! I love how cute this is. Two good stories I've read by you know, this and Sebastian Bear... I never did finish that one though. xD
Anyway. Amazing job. Nicely done. El's a good main character. You can see the change in her from the beginning, like a lot has changed like she said. Good ending. I love Grove... And you. Thanks for writing this, it makes me smile. =)
Yvonnia
2008-06-03
ch 20,
abuseAww, this story gave me the warm and fuzzies. It was so cheesy, but in a good way. Yeah, it's cheesy good. Cheesy good, like 'double Pepperjack on an Italian BMT sub from Subway' good, or 'extra cheese on a pepperoni pizza from Papa Johns' good, or like those 'old Burger King commericals with the cheesy dude' good, or well, I'm sure you get the point.

I loved El's personality, but especially her sarcasm. Sarcasm is good, but it's even better when people don't get it. The chemistry between Ella and Grove was right on point. The way they flowed was magical, kid. Makes me not want to be single right now...but I'm sure I'll get over it.

Oh and the whole naming the tall, blonde kid Hanz cracked me up. I laughed so hard when he was like "My name's really Jason."

I hate Adam; he so sucks so bad. As a matter of fact he sucks **...sideways...through a straw! Why couldn't he just understand that he wasn't wanted. Ugh. He's such a drama queen with his whole 'Look at me! Look at me!' complex. Since I'm a freak of nature, I usually equate situations in stories/real life with songs. Kelly Clarkson's "Don't Waste Your Time" was so playign through my head everytime they fought. Particularly the chorus:

Don't waste your time trying to fix.
What I wanna erase
What I need to forget
Don't waste your time on me, my friend. Friend?
What does that even mean?

Gotta love those break-up songs. Here's a link to the full song if you're interested. It's such a Adam/Ella song; it's crazy.
< w . azlyrics . com /lyrics /kellyclarkson /dontwasteyourtime . html > Take out the spaces of course.

Overall, I would say: Job well done. This was such a fantastic romatic comedy, and although, I'm an action sort of girl. I can recognize a good romance when I see it.
katieee
2008-06-01
ch 20,
abuseWe, I liked it.
:]
It was sweet and nice.
And now I want my own Grove.
:]
katieee
2008-05-31
ch 12,
abuseIm so scared.
I love them.
:[
katieee
2008-05-31
ch 5,
abuseThat was a horrible thing for him to say to her.
katieee
2008-05-31
ch 4,
abuse:] Grove = Love
katieee
2008-05-31
ch 3,
abuseI love her dad, he's nice and sweet.
I love her and her life.
I wish I had it.
:]
katieee
2008-05-31
ch 2,
abuseI really like this story already.
:] Ella's pretty cool and I love Grove.
Grace doesn't seem to concerned about her friend and finds it okay to walk away while her friends over. I have nothing against her; yet.
katieee
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseI likke him,
:]
cheergurl12
2008-05-29
ch 20,
abuseomg omg omg omg i just read tht
whole story and it was so cute
ahah i loved it ! :)
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