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| LoSt ReMeDy 2007-12-06 ch 1,  | abuseHi! I'm loving the very last line Very excellent poem So keep writing so I have more poems to review Lol Keep Smiling LoSt ReMeDy |
| paindevoursme 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abusethis is really good...WAY better than my poems!...I really like ur poems :) keep writing! how long have u been writing poems? I started last yr...lol |
| Jane Darius 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThank you for the review, Princess-anna! I enjoyed this poem. It's interesting which words you chose to bold because it helped me understand the subject and purpose of the poem. The last line is probably my favorite although I liked what you used for the summary :) |
| marshbar960 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abusevery descriptive here...and love the title. thanks for sharing and keep writing! thanks also for the review, my angel! |
| Charity F 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. You've taken my breath away. And (haha) left me feeling revitalised. |
| Marilena 2007-02-09 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow! And you said MY poem was gorgeous... This is truly amazing. It's like a recollection of memories and feelings that you have been keeping hidden and, suddenly, they emerge again, devoid of emotions. And that's were its strength lies; the way you write about things so suffocating in a purposefully flat manner. And the ending is colored with growing hope and finally, some stronger feelings... I love it, I really do! M. |
| Dani P 2007-01-24 ch 1, | abusegreat poem. full of many meaningful lines. love it. |
| vampiric-happenings 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusethis is spectacualr! i love it! wonderful expression and wording! fav lines: I tried to turn back the hands of time in my mind-&-Therefore, I now swim courageously across this stunned turquoise reality towards my next tomorrow u are a fantastic writer with great talent! keep it up! :D -thanks for the review!- |
| Falcon0Rider 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, you describe things so vividly! This is terrific. I don't know what else to say, it's just so good. |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseoMG! that was so good loved it! Yeah I'm gonan write more poems after I update at least my fic Life At The Hospital. lol. as it has not been updated in 4ever. |
| avaleighfitzgerald 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI would pick out one line that I love but I can't, i love them all equally. Once again the poem was really beautiful, your way of creating these perfect images is enviable. I really like your style of writing! Ava |
| Angevin 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. Almost brought a tear to my eye. I feel like I can relate to this in my own way, and other people can relate in their own ways, too. This is great. Awesome poem. |
| Guardian Angel Of Innocence 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's a pretty poem... Loved it. Keep up the good work. ^^ |
| NewName 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abusevery nice piece of poetry =) i love how you used different metaphors and a spiritual kind of imagery to move your poem along smoothly. keep up the great work! |
| over-achieving-misfit 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseYou can look at this poem from different angles, I think that's a mark of strong poetry, I mean look at Shakespeare. It reminds me of those oral stories youd hear, more than a poem youd read, thats how real it feels. Great job! -Alissa- |