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Reviews For: When I daydream

Arichos
2006-09-14
ch 1,
abuseYou set a good mood here, sort of idle or lazy. At least that's what i'm getting. And once again, good job with the ryming.
All Alone With Her Thoughts
2006-09-10
ch 1,
abuseI liked the flow of the poem, and the writting. I know how you feel - I think everyone feels this way sometimes. Thanks for reviewing my stuff! =D ~Rowan~
foreversentencedbyu
2006-09-09
ch 1,
abuseI like the ryhme scheme very good but the poemits self is a lil jumpy. Very good over all! Keep it up!
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