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| Muslim 2007-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a great poem. Many poeple think islam is bad because of the people who SAY they're muslims but in truth, never do what Allah has ordered us to. Many are too blind to try to find out that what some "muslims" do is against Islam. |
| dreaming_freak 2007-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing! simple and beautiful. cheers FunkyFlower15! |
| Andrew Joshua Talon 2006-11-11 ch 1,  | abuseRead about dhimmitude and the true purpose of jihad. Read about the jihads of the Muslim nation after it's founding. Read about Muhammad's actions and sayings, and then tell me Islam is peace. Islam means "submission". The only peace found is surrender. |
| Arichos 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseNot only is this a great poem, but it puts to light the ignorance of people. Islam has great philosopies of the (Four?) pillars, and those who use it as a reason to kill people are cowards in the face of their own god. If i'm wrong, please correct me. Anyway, good message within an art. |
| shazza_flower 2006-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was beutiful, congrats on writing such a touching poem! |
| CRaZy-OdIN 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abuseI love this piece. I totally cant stand people who label islam under a terrorist supporting catagory. The title is very similar to one of my ones Islam = Peace :) but its so much better than mine. keep it up. take care. hope all is well. x |
| wendy 2006-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseNever use the word cliche in a poem. Rhyming a derivative of "true" with "you" is tired, and sad. You couldn't some up with something more creative? Both of those stand out as glaring follies in your otherwise charming poem. |
| Aquafied 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseyou are right in some ways. truly, it is religions purpose to kill off others and thus others should not use it to justify dastardly deeds. but what is wrong? it is all opinion you know, amazing, no? i cant believe religion is for everyone but i think if that floats their boat. let it float, just dont drag me down if you begin to sink. |
| Neurotic Consciousness 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseGood. It's sad how a small number of people can ruin the name of a whole social group. |