the first stanza is wonderful, really good work here. ~Bex xx

Wonderful, once again. In each and every one of your poems there shines a new light. Keep writing, s.

Wow, this is amazing! It speaks volumes! *Adds to favorites* Will you read some of mine?

beautiful. i dont know why you didnt want to post it..

wow. that is so beautiful. i love the image of illusions woven of silk, and being torn by the heavy truth. it's so striking. lovely job. xoxo-xan