Aww loved it, very sad though, cant belive its only a oneshot id love to see how things turned out! well done, very well written too.

Oneshot? I don't believe it. I beg of you to please continue this! It's very nice, and I love the opening. ::grins::

That's it?!? How could you leave it there?!? *sigh* There's just a few grammatical things (like when you're descsribing the brothers' relationship- about their parents and the years- in the beginning you use a run on and some other small things- commas, mostly and where you're using them) but other than that this was great. Especially that first scene between Jody and Nik. *drool* But this is a one shot? You're not going to tell us what Nik does? *whimper*

It was good anyway. Beautiful. Great. Magnificent. And all those other words.

WOW...That was weird. Brother and a brother. Yeah... weird. Bye Good Job tho.

b.j.-

I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE!!

Oh the angst! Oh woe! God that was a buetiful story. I absoulutly loved it. ^-^ Your everly devoted fan-Bone