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| FoxTail13 2007-01-30 ch 1,  | abuseOh my god, I'm speechless. That is rare for me, because usually I've got something to say about most poetry. This was sheer brilliance. Holy crap, I am in love with you poetry, seriously. Keep up the amazing work! |
| Talking In Typos 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this, you wrote it so beautifully. It almost hurts to read. |
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuse'so you cry. and you cry. until your eyes go dry.' theres something about those words, they really stick in my head, its really haunting but you know i l.o.v.e it all the same. music is a salvation, its true. this is an amazing peice that i am currantly loving to bits. keep it up man :D:D |
| Hidden Lies 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I loved this, I know what you are saying in it. Its just ...wow |
| HauntedMisery 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuse"no one cares about you (so you cry about it in the bathroom stalls)"Wow...this piece uses EXCELLENT description, its beautiful and amazing, excellent work! I will be looking forward to your next piece! ~*HauntedMisery*~ |
| Neaera 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this because I know exactly what's going on here. Sometimes this is just...flat out what I feel and the only thing that keeps me going is my music. Keep it uP! |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuse"no one cares about you (so you cry about it in the bathroom stalls) you put in theplayer andyou pressplay. theses wordsbegin to put you back togetherinstead of breaking you intop i e c e s" i love it. Great choice of words, and i can relate so much to all of this (music is my life =]). I love the way its versed with the triangles and its all so seperate and flows well. i repeat- i love it. |
| dress her up in fairytales 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseoh.this.is.so.beautiful. i love all of it. the formating is great, the words are just wonderful & i can so relate. music is love. this is going on my favs! |
| Anani Moose 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI really like this! It definitely conveys your love for music, and I can totally identify with it. Music is just sort of healing, you know? Beautifully written! |
| randompoetry 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. It described how music makes me feel too. Lovely. |