Beautiful. I absolutely love this. I think anyone who has done anything they are not entirely proud of will relate to this, at least a small bit. The last line really clinched this.
Definitely a favorite.

Tare care, darling.

This is amazing! It has so much truth and feeling behind it! Wonderful!

the last 5 lines are excellent! +fav!

those lines really made an impression.. :) keep it up!

-llazuli-

Wow, this is really good - especially (as I read in your profile) that English aint your first language. I think it's really amazing that you're able to wriote like this in a language not your own.

Keep it up :D

This is so beautifully sad. This poem is fantastic. I can relate to it exactly. I love the use of the simple words, and the repetition of "You said", "I said." Also the way they work off of each other.

My favorite part, and the part that hit me the most, was the last five lines. Such opposites, and the dejected tone of the words. Especially with the last line thrown in "For I am neither"

Absolutely brilliant, and beautiful.

Much love...TinvuielDork

Title really fits well.

Amazing message and insight to human interaction. I can definitly relate in small ways. Great work. Keep writing. The ending especially leaves this intriguing taste in one's mouth.

I think the style of this poem was a little too choppy, but the message was nice.