beautiful. you could also submit this to one of those nature magazines for kids or a conservationist magazine for kids.

what a sweet story! =]

Hurray for writing something not depressing and disturbed! Not that that's a bad thing, but balance is good. You might want to have someone proofread it before you submit it, though. But Cricket is just gonna lap it up.

Aw. Tiz kute.

i very much like!