simply beautiful

wow loved this. I hope the mispelling of morning was deliberate because I thought it added a lot of feeling to the poem. Adored the ending.

Sweet and a little innocent, which sex can rarely be.

Bravo.

I LOVE this. 'we find common ground under our fingernails' - fantastic! critiscism none. praise muchos!

Wow this beautiful. From the first line to the last, the imagry was elegant and dream-like. I absolutely love this piece. I'm adding it to my favorites. Keep writing.

falling into beds from the edge of the world.

wow.

i love it.

I like all the images in this, and I also like the way all your poems seem to connect to each other. It's very interesting. You have a few misspelled words throughout this (like your in the first stanza should be you're, starring should be staring, and mourning should be morning), but that's minor. Your ideas are beautiful. Keep writing! :)

i love the word play in this. great pace.