Reviews for Elemental Opposites

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Tomiko90 2007-08-18 ch 2,	abuseMy favorite character is Ciaran! I loved what he said about the toupee! :D
Tomiko90 2007-08-18 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! I like it so far :D
Lost In Thought 769 2007-07-03 ch 12,	abusei'm sorry for being such a horrible reviewer lately. ::shifty eyes:: therefore i am reviewing now that i've finally read this chapter o that one scene was dark. very cool. not usually your choice of..erm..genre? that works, but very well done. i think the part where Lucas gets up, is really dizzy, gets kissed and runs is rushed since he was just really dizzy and probably isnt in the best shape to run right to church cause of all his injuries, so it seems like you were trying to get it out of the way, however thats just me being picky.i do think though Lucas going to church was really very nicely done. very different ^^ sorry bout being very beta-y update when you get back ^^
Cedric Kale 2007-06-16 ch 12,	abuseWow, Ciaran is so powerful. Lucas make up ur mind damn it.
mia5081 2007-06-15 ch 12,	abuseo.0 i love your story, and i hope that lucas and ciaran get together =) update soon! ~mia
Xxnever-knewxX 2007-04-17 ch 11,	abuseWo (figures fictionpress will take off the other 'o's but decides to do it anyway) Ciro was a cat...absolutely adorablee . poor calder was a maid u.u...bet he was hella adorable too n.n and there are...MEMBERSHIP CARDS? to the CGBFC? I need one of those u.u in fact I might just make one ;] kawaii. Lucas is a bit oblivious not thinking he left her heartbroken. [sighs] ah well. "Don't forget to review"? No, you see, it's "REVIEW! Or be eaten by fanged, genetically mutated cotton balls!" you must command it onii-chan. Sheesh. Waffle :D (and Sir Clarence :D)
Midnights Scream 2007-03-17 ch 2,	abuseI'm liking the idea, but you're getting way too many peopl at one time which is understandable since the story just started, but you might want to give us reminders now and again so we remember who exactly they are.
Midnights Scream 2007-03-17 ch 1,	abuse:)I like it.It's cute and you did a good job or putting a different variety of people in the story.
Xxnever-knewxX 2007-03-16 ch 10,	abuse"Ditzy girls" -.- Thanks M thanks a lot. [sniffs indignantly]Disregarding that small insult u.u STUPID Pierce imatation.I'm glad Calder and Trory got together. But LIAM DIED?! Where did that come from? Poor poor Liam. R.I.P ZOMG where's the CGBFC?? ^.~ cute chapter
Cedric Kale 2007-03-16 ch 10,	abusei told you they were the next pair didn't i and i was so right, go me but thing is this story is so predictable, maybe because i wrote something like it when i was like 11, seriously i'm not joking or making fun of you, but i didn't put it on fictionpress. next pair is hopefully lucas/Ciaran get them together damn it yeah. hopefully lucas gets over his homophobia.
Cedric Kale 2007-03-16 ch 9,	abusei hate you lucas you are such a bastard, yeah. and Cairan's jealous cute much he is so emo.
Cedric Kale 2007-03-16 ch 8,	abuseyea Pierce and Ciro they finnally kissed so cute, go Ciro uh huh go Ciro u're so cute. we they're a really adorable pair aren't they yea. Next pair to be revealed is Calder and Troy
Cedric Kale 2007-03-16 ch 3,	abuseanother cliche but i love this cliche i love it when they find out they've been endowned with cool powers, wee. ciro is so cute, i love cute people they are so freaking cute. love ciaran go darkness. liam is so freaking old i mean 30s so old
Cedric Kale 2007-03-16 ch 2,	abusewow love ciro he is so cute, woo hoo. but another freaking cliche: they all meet in a huge clearing in the forest. i'm sorry i don't like cliches, but i love your story in fact i love anything to do with element go water yeah
Cedric Kale 2007-03-16 ch 1,	abuseno offence but er... aren't i supposed to find out their powers later in the story, but it was kinda easy figured these people powers: Ciro: Water much, blue eyes much, or maybe wind Calder: Obviously ice or water Troy: Fire, i'm sure of that one Ciaran: Are you sure darkness is supposed to be an element, or maybe im wrong. i haven't worked out the rest, or maybe Pierce is wind or earth, i dunno. Maybe i'm wrong altogether then i must look like an egomaniac but i'm not, seriously i'm not. i love Ciro he is so freaking cute and Ciaran (i love people with dark personalities) wee let's keep on reading then. Going on my alert and fav list.

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