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| shadowc 2007-10-14 ch 14,  | abuseWow, I read the entire thing in one sitting. I really like this, it's different from the other stories I've read. Is this gonna be updated shortly, or has it been pushed aside for Project Orion? Believerit or not, I'd actually like to see this updatedre than Project Orion. Keep up this exceptional work and update soon. |
| fusionbeam 2007-06-26 ch 14, | abusecool story so far keep the updates up |
| Casey Drake 2007-04-22 ch 14, | abuseLisianthia... she must have hidden, and then her anger and fear fueled her power... until she was confronted with someone who just... had felt too much fear to be afraid of illusions. :) CD |
| For What Its Worth 2007-04-21 ch 14, | abuseMiriel of the Void...that explains quite a bit. lol...Does poor Syrus always have to be so clueless? My opinion may have something to do with the fact that what he knows, we know. lol. Why should Lilia know besat what sort of people exist in the world? And is power physically manifestable in blood? I like Kilth taking an interest...he seems cool. " I went there once, haven't been sane since": rofl. I like Lisianthia, too. heheh. Trust lilia to take them to a violently restricted place. i take it "nuta nek" means "mind your own business"? |
| Casey Drake 2007-03-26 ch 13, | abuseWow! Finally the review system works! Gah, what is the DEAL with Corin? Even madmen have a reason for doing what they do--what is his? :) CD |
| For What Its Worth 2007-03-19 ch 12, | abuseHeheheh. This story is very refreshingly not in favor of the main character. But another language spell wouldn't be too much help, would it? |
| Casey Drake 2007-02-24 ch 11, | abuseOh my... :) CD |
| For What Its Worth 2007-02-24 ch 11, | abuseOkay, so we can safely infer the mysterious person is Kilth? And the defeated Telsar boy is the supplicant...good writing. |
| Casey Drake 2007-02-21 ch 10, | abuseoy... her magic is gone? aiyai... Hmm. I wonder what he said? I guess I'll find out next chapter. :) CD |
| For What Its Worth 2007-02-14 ch 9, | abuseAwesome story. Very few have insecure godlings, laughable spider demons, backwards village boys not out for glory, and are beautifully worded. VERY nice. |
| Casey Drake 2007-02-13 ch 9, | abuseiinteresting... They've fought Necroth and he's not gonna think much of them... and he's immune to their attacks. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2007-02-07 ch 8, | abuseOh, that line made me crack up... And... oh my... well, at least he can understand her now... :) CD |
| vexi 2007-02-05 ch 8, anon. | abuseEnjoying the story a lot. Amazing stuff! (My name was previously aneedegorarose if i have reviewed before :S if i haven't I need a little slap cos this story deserves them!) |
| Casey Drake 2007-01-30 ch 7, | abuseDangit. That ring is important but it's a surprise. Gah. Anyway, huh. Interesting. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2006-12-23 ch 6, | abuseoh... oh my... It was nice of Lilia to protect them that way, though... :) CD |