good story, i hope there willbe a sequel because the ending made it look like there would be more.

this was actually pretty good. you sure it is the end. is there a sequel? or its longer. this is really good stuff.

"Updated: 04-16-07"

Ooh, ouch. That's a shank to the heart there, buddy. I find a really good story with just the right amount of humor, cliche-bashing, and confusion, and it gets a two-year hiatus. Crap.

-SapphireIris

Wow, I read the entire thing in one sitting. I really like this, it's different from the other stories I've read. Is this gonna be updated shortly, or has it been pushed aside for Project Orion? Believerit or not, I'd actually like to see this updatedre than Project Orion. Keep up this exceptional work and update soon.

cool story so far keep the updates up

Lisianthia... she must have hidden, and then her anger and fear fueled her power... until she was confronted with someone who just... had felt too much fear to be afraid of illusions.

:) CD

Miriel of the Void...that explains quite a bit. lol...Does poor Syrus always have to be so clueless? My opinion may have something to do with the fact that what he knows, we know. lol. Why should Lilia know besat what sort of people exist in the world? And is power physically manifestable in blood? I like Kilth taking an interest...he seems cool. " I went there once, haven't been sane since": rofl. I like Lisianthia, too. heheh. Trust lilia to take them to a violently restricted place. i take it "nuta nek" means "mind your own business"?

Wow! Finally the review system works!

Gah, what is the DEAL with Corin? Even madmen have a reason for doing what they do-what is his?

:) CD

Heheheh. This story is very refreshingly not in favor of the main character. But another language spell wouldn't be too much help, would it?

Oh my...

:) CD

Okay, so we can safely infer the mysterious person is Kilth? And the defeated Telsar boy is the supplicant...good writing.

oy... her magic is gone? aiyai...

Hmm. I wonder what he said? I guess I'll find out next chapter.

:) CD

Awesome story. Very few have insecure godlings, laughable spider demons, backwards village boys not out for glory, and are beautifully worded. VERY nice.

iinteresting...

They've fought Necroth and he's not gonna think much of them... and he's immune to their attacks.

:) CD

Oh, that line made me crack up...

And... oh my... well, at least he can understand her now...

:) CD