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| VELVETxKISSES 2007-02-15 ch 1,  | abusethis paints a very descriptive picture... i like it. ^_^ |
| aesahattyr 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abusehey, i really wanted to let you know that ive been reading your work for a while now (although i only just recently got one of these accounts on here!) and i admire everything you write so much! its funny too, cause i write poetry also, and its sort of the same kind but theres a waiting period before i can upload any of mine... :( |
| MonsterGirl 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI like it =) ending is nice and nice imagery to me anyways xp |
| Elenive 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI love this one. It's biting and realistic. "You tasted like oranges and charcoal." I love this line the best. The ending fit perfectly as well. |