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| NowOrNever 2006-09-10 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it. I think the concert energy felt natural, and I could picture it easily. You didn't go overboard with the descriptions and shove them down my throat, but you got the image across. And I love the way you ended it. It was a great last paragraph. : ) |
| moon maiden of time 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseohs...The visuality stuff- you know details and sensory **, is great. |