I would concidered this to maybe one day be a great song. But even better as the poem it already is. Even tho there is sadness in it, its beauty overcomes it.

Love Air head.

I love to sing and i have lessons, and i know wen songs r good- I wish i'd wrote tht

you've got writing talent!,use it and u neva know you'll be the next songwriting mccartney

xox