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| Lady Fingers 2007-12-30 ch 1,  | abusehehhehehahahahah paul, i remember paul "only way to have temporary fun is wreck a little tragic and raise a little havoc." wonderful quote baby |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseGood, little poem/letter. You really should capitialize things properly so it's easier to read. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| hey maria 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseAh, I love this. In my mind it's addressed to Paul McCartney, I don't know why. I especially liked the thing about kids thinking of themselves as starving artists and stuff, because it's just so true. Keep writing. |
| fairytale failure 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's beautiful. But it does leave me wondering; what does Paul think like? |
| citrus scented 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseaint that the truth. i dont know who this paul is, but it sure sounds like everybody should think like him. i love the "i wish everyone thought like you" paragraph...the speech is very realistic. i like the different format and style. |
| mercury.love 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's a neat format and it's really... hmm, kind of funny but kind of wistful at the same time. The whole first paragraph was awesome. Keep writing! |
| C. M. Kerr 2006-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI couldn't help but giggle at this, I'm sorry if that wasn't the response you intended to evoke. "They're all convinced they're seventeen year old starving artists with a drug addiction." If I had a dollar for everyone I've met who could be described by that, I'd buy them each a razorblade and spend the change on a book of sad poems. I did, -really-, like this. Don't let my incoherent rambling distract you from that. :) |