 B. M. Reed 2006-09-13 . chapter 1i liked this one :] |
 If Only Serenity 2006-09-11 . chapter 1^_^ very cute, and it shows how sweet and kind the rain can be^^
With love, IFoS |
 Dale Christopher 2006-09-10 . chapter 1Very cool, it made me laugh. Keep it up.
Daze |
 citrus scented 2006-09-10 . chapter 1haha i love this. its taking quite a serious statement, and making it fun. there ought to be more poems like this. |
 greenGalilee 2006-09-10 . chapter 1Haha... Never before seen haiku used this way. Very interesting. And with a good amount of irony, plain truth, and some sorrow.
Good job. |
 Basara 2006-09-10 . chapter 1hehe...a little saddening...
nice... |
 Evelyn Tan 2006-09-09 . chapter 1Lol! Hilarious! ^^ I really like how you made it seem so cheery, and yet, managed to incorporate a tinge of sadness in it. =) Very nicely done. -hugs- |
 mercury.love 2006-09-09 . chapter 1So so cute and pretty! I love it.
Favorite list-ed. :) |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-09-09 . chapter 1Excellent formatting and voice. Well written haiku. |