This is truly gorgeous, in a depressing kind of way. In spite of the two typos I picked up on, I think you're a really good poet!

i read it, felt it and loved it

well done kiddo

Again you sound sad. I can't decide if this is just a passing muse or if it's something deeper and altogether more dangerous. It is a beautiful poem, though. You truly have the gift of the pen.

~Ciao, Ayaerhis

The way you convey your emotions into words is beautiful. This poem is beautiful. Keep writing.