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| simpleplan13 2006-10-18 ch 1,   | I like the whole play on the stars controlling your fate... interesting ending... |
| laundryshapedsouls 2006-09-23 ch 1, | This seems slightly journalistic but its beautiful:). everything's right there. |
| cornered.sensations 2006-09-12 ch 1, | bittersweet, lovely work, I love how you left the answer for the reader to answer. Great work |
| akaSummer 2006-09-11 ch 1, | beautiful. keep up the good work. |
| lackluster 2006-09-11 ch 1, | vague and evidently personal, yet the refernce of the cosmos feels neverending. |
| dress her up in fairytales 2006-09-10 ch 1, | painful last lines. still beautiful though. |
| mercury.love 2006-09-10 ch 1, | Maybe I'm biased because I love everything about stars, but I really liked this. It felt really personal. Like it just captured a moment. If that makes sense. Short and simple, but you got everything across perfectly. Good writing, keep it up. |