I like the whole play on the stars controlling your fate... interesting ending...

This seems slightly journalistic but its beautiful:). everything's right there.

bittersweet, lovely work, I love how you left the answer for the reader to answer. Great work

beautiful. keep up the good work.

vague and evidently personal, yet the refernce of the cosmos feels neverending.

painful last lines.

still beautiful though.

Maybe I'm biased because I love everything about stars, but I really liked this. It felt really personal. Like it just captured a moment. If that makes sense. Short and simple, but you got everything across perfectly. Good writing, keep it up.