Omg I love this one! It made me cry steph, it really is so touching. The line that got me was " So now you are here with that sad girl's on friend". Great job!

Very good. I hope you got a good mark for it!

It has very nice flow, but a few of the words are two syllables. Is that ok?

Hey steph I like it...youll get an A for sure!

Good rhythm, and subject matter. Well done, and keep writing!

Anna _