Reviews for Blood, Bones, and Salt

Reviews For: Blood, Bones, and Salt - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Ramenluver 2007-07-25 ch 1,	abuseHm. Liked how you used something like a painting to describe how you felt. I really did like this one. faving -Ramen
Icicle Tears 2007-02-27 ch 1,	abuseHEY! It's been a while since my last review. smiles It took me a little while to read this one, (I was distracted by stories of mutts), but it was well worth it. As I've stated in my profile... "Check out Guardrail. She's the best." And I was right to say it. Every time I read one of your poems, it just seems to surprise me even more. sighs I love reading your poetry, and it inspires me even more, every time. My poetry has turned from lyrics to the real thing. I blame you. nods Yep, it's all your fault. So, if my poetry begins to read like yours... sighs Your fault. P.S. I found a typo... smacks the grammar nazi side of him "My temple by the sea, Such and ungodly fixture, Crumbling." I think it should read such AN ungodly fixture... Not sure though. I'll let you confirm that. Now, how many more do I owe you... sighs
Crazy.Silly.Stupid. 2006-12-02 ch 1,	abusek... so i'm not completely positive i know what you're trying to say with this and if you are saying what i think then i have felt some part of that almost everyday of my life!
cold white submission 2006-11-05 ch 1,	abuseI know exactly what you're talking about there...or perhaps I don't. Who knows?
Susurrus 2006-10-28 ch 1,	abuseOnce again, wonderful work! I especially love the descriptions of the painting and the 'dead skeleton world'...and of course the last line is highly quotable quality stuff. (^_^) Killer. Susurrus
magnusthewolf 2006-10-07 ch 1,	abusethis is wonderful. i like the way you injected little comments here and there, it went just beautiful.y great descriptions and choice of words and just overal a good piece you have here! ;)
loneman 2006-09-30 ch 1, anon.	abusevery well done, captured the essence totally. Been there myself all to often, living it myself as I write this and it wants to make you scream, as frustration tends to boil over. Sorry got carried away. This is your time. would like to chat sometime.
Maranwe Telrunya 2006-09-30 ch 1,	abuseWow... I love it. The images are amazing... creepy. =D Maranwe Telrunya
Black and White Dreams 2006-09-30 ch 1,	abuseThis is really beautiful. Nice imagery. This is a really strong poem. Nice work and thanks for the review. ::~Cat~::
The Intelligent Designer 2006-09-26 ch 1,	abuseI really felt something when I read this piece. Even though it was really written for your situation, other people, I think, will not have too much difficulty relating to it, which I believe is an important aspect of poetry. Some parts in the middle don't flow all that well, and I don't quite get why you put somethings in (). Anyway, I liked it.
spiffy-sophia 2006-09-25 ch 1,	abuseYou have a very honest style, and I have this same feeling so much--preferring to be alone but at the same time wishing you could have company if you wanted to...Your imagery is very good at well. I liked this poem a lot, and it had an excellent ending.
polka dots and addictions 2006-09-24 ch 1,	abusei love the imaginary in this, its really well put together and has a nice ring to it. you're reading Lament of thre Lamb!? I've heard loads about that , and i really wanna read it =) I'm reading Vampire Game mainly at the mo though. Thanks for your review ~Bex xx
Autumn Reflections 2006-09-21 ch 1,	abuseOo wow... i love the images you have placed in here. "A painted picture too picture perfect to be real" - I really love this line, it has a really good rhythm to it! this poem is very, very beautiful! thanks for the review, too! Keep writing! Autumn
commemorativemisery 2006-09-15 ch 1,	abusei wish i could be that close to someone...anyway, greaqt job! i really like it! this is good! keep up the good work!! btw thanks for the review!
Samana 2006-09-10 ch 1,	abusei absolutely love this, it has so much presence to it. it reminds me of Xerophyte's poems, give her a read, i recomend memory and in the end, very good poem makes me crave for more, a little better than your haikus, but i love them both, peace

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