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| ilovetheopera 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. I like the chorus, it ties up everything nicely. The last two lines were quite a nice ending. My fav line is 'a paraffin smile and a rust covered sneer'. |
| the-foresight 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was very beautiful and had a fantastic title. The chorus was great as well. |