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| Seeker of the Way 2006-09-14 ch 1,   | ZOMG, this is GREAT! It's like Shel Silverstein!I wrote a poem on writer's block "Piece of Mind" adn maybe some others.Thanks for your review! I can't believe how dumb you're classmates are, but I AM proud of how smart YOU are! I refuse to dumb down my poetry #_# the words that come BELONG there! Good gravy people, it's caled a dictionary! It's even online now, sheesh!hahaha, anyway nice poem! |
| Arichos 2006-09-14 ch 1, | This actually made me laugh, but really good. I like your ryme scheme, it really connects every word together. |
| Needa S 2006-09-12 ch 1, | I hate writers block as well. Awesome job! |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-10 ch 1, | Well written. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| prettyinpinkgal 2006-09-10 ch 1, | Amen! I hate writer's block! Especially on fanficton.net...I have made like twenty stories and barely any are finished and I take way too long to update because I can't think of anything! Then again, that happens on fictionpress too, but I don't have that many stories on here. |
| ramsaymatt 2006-09-10 ch 1, | Without meaning any offence, I wish you luck in finding your way back to the "good poems stack" that you speak of.A recomendation I might make is not to force youself into writing poetry where everything rhymes- some of them in this poem seem rather forced and as such don't work as well as they might.There's evidence in poems such as "Where I'm From" that you have good writing in you; there is a "good poems stack", and I notice that that poem doesn't rhyme! All the best in your future work,Matt |
| polaroid.sky 2006-09-10 ch 1, | I love the second and last stanza. Cute, funny poem. Oh, how writer's block is truly frustrating. |