 Your Execution 2009-12-04 . chapter 25I LOVE this story. The last five(?) chapters ended perfectly. This story was/is awesome. yeah :D |
 Gentle. Edge. 2009-10-20 . chapter 25That was a really good way to end the story and I thought WIT was great :) It was unique and well-written. |
 Gentle. Edge. 2009-10-18 . chapter 1Your sentences seemed a little weird, as if they were missing something, but I understood what you meant most of the time. It was really interesting with the way you started it off. I liked how you incorporated the characters and how she has a pet squirrel. Very nice ;D |
 s-pecial-lee me 2009-10-15 . chapter 25aww love this story. missed a few words here and there and there are a few typos, but the story is great. off to read the sequel now. |
 Venomous Vengeance 2009-10-04 . chapter 25Oh My GOD! this story totally rocks! i'm so glad i read it! I liked rebe the most, as well as logan. josh, mr. yale, and greg but he changes alot doesn't he? but i loved this story! i think i'm going to have to read all of your stories because they are Magnificent! can't wait to start on the next one! |
 TiggerGurl 2009-09-26 . chapter 25fantastic! Do you know how many pages this story is ? |
 psycho angel 2009-08-13 . chapter 25you are truly something.
Loved your story.
Really enjoyed it! |
 reader 2009-06-16 . chapter 14 Aww :'(
I'm reading this story again! :)
I dunno if I reviewed before though.
Anyway, love your stories.
Seriously, private high school is so expensive; does Greg really have 20 grand a year to toss around? |
 Songorita 2009-06-02 . chapter 25w00t. Great story I loved it, especially the squirrel. I love the squirrel. |
 falgabird 2009-05-03 . chapter 6This is so unbelievably good! You should have this published; seriously! Thanks for the good writing! |
 I'm-the-Invisible-Girl 2009-03-09 . chapter 25wow, I loved the ending!
it was really good
i loved this story all around
congrats on writing it!
=P |
 I'm-the-Invisible-Girl 2009-03-08 . chapter 21Yay! I love this story!
its so good!
now i gotta finish reading!
lols |
 I'm-the-Invisible-Girl 2009-03-08 . chapter 16wow this story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
I wasn't sure on it at first but when i started reading it i was shocked
it is really really good!
now i gotta read on!
=P |
 HinaRukia 2009-03-07 . chapter 8 PLEASE READ UNTIL THE END I DO NOT WISH FOR YOUR TALENT TO BE WASTED! THIS POST DOES NOT ONLY POINT OUT YOUR WEAKNESS BUT GIVES YOU ADVICE PLEASE READ (I WANT TO SEE YOU IMPROVE SO I MAY READ SOME OF YOUR IMPROVED WORKS IN THE FUTURE!)
You read shoujo manga don't you. Your story is a mix of harry potter and a typical shoujo love-com. WIT lacks creativity and as I read more and more I feel as though the story is a simple mesh of different stories you have read. To improve and develop your own plot and not have a tedious story with no zeal try this: create a story line, then try to see which parts of your story matches which stories you've read. The plot and characters are the foundation of any story. If you see that your plots are similar to what you've read then you can try the following to create a unique plot: Imagine a situation you would like to be in (you can borrow one from a shoujo manga or harry potter) and put yourself into a character's shoes "what would I do if I were in that situation" (the character doesn't have to be like you nor does it have to be female). The less alike you are the better! You have talent, your characters are well made and even if you seem to copy your plot from different stories, you have the talent to put them together into a coherent and seemingly intresting story. Otsukare sama desu ta |
 Cupid's Jinx 2009-02-25 . chapter 25-grins- I loved it!
Amazing plot and characters XD
Though some of it I didn't quite understand. It wasn't anything to do with the actual story, it was just some of the words that you used in the wrong context and...hmm, hard to explain.
But I knew what you meant XD
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