Wow.

Definitely the best I have read in a long time.

Hey, by any chance you could check for grammar mistakes, I'm a bit sloppy when it comes to things like it that. Anyhoo, this poem was very dark-but then again it's about fear. You should propably spread the lines by one space, cause sometimes peope-like me, can't see words clearly if they are stuck together like that. I don't need glasses, is just that I tend to lose track of the line somehow. I don't know. Anyway nice poem- actually I love it. Thank you for giving me CC, I'll try to fix my story soon. Aliright till next time

adaku-chan