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Reviews For: What Mysteries Await Us?

Jaina-Skylar
2006-09-17
ch 2,
Very good! I bow to you! Please put more up soon!
daedal
2006-09-12
ch 2,
Going well ^^ One mistake I noticed was that you kept switching from first to third person. Sometimes you're writing from Andrea's point of view and using 'I' and sometimes you're calling her by name. It got a little confusing ^^
daedal
2006-09-11
ch 1,
Awesome!! Sounds like the excellent beginning to a story ^^ I loved how you made her cool uncle the vice principal and how he let her off *g* That cracked me up. Please continue!
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