 beyond.that.horizon 2007-03-10 . chapter 1**. beautiful. |
 JaNde 2006-11-06 . chapter 1I liked this one. quite a lot. *nod* it has that strange feel to it (a GOOD strange, a GOOD one!) *salutes* yosh! you keep writing and I might become active on this site again (and that may put you off, but eh XD) |
 bread and circuses 2006-09-23 . chapter 1This is completely amazing. I read it at first for the images, but I read it again and I think I actually *got* it, and it's even more incredible. I love how it's kind of all over the place, but so together at the same time. |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2006-09-16 . chapter 1I love the way this starts, with the flash making you believe you're witness to a photo being taken. I'm not sure what exactly is going on in this poem, though. The last line really makes me wonder about what's going on. This poem is pretty, but without images (I know, me and my images), I'm having a really hard time figuring out what's going on. Keep writing! :) |
 breezy nostrils 2006-09-15 . chapter 1i get why you called it polaroid sky, cause we often look at pictures and think of the memories that they represent. nice work. |
 water lily nymph 2006-09-15 . chapter 1i really love this. it seems like it could mean so many things at once. almost too fast, but perfectly dreamy and slow.
great, great job. :) |
 wildwolffree17 2006-09-14 . chapter 1Well done. |
 Aquafied 2006-09-10 . chapter 1i think it plays the depiction of a polaroid camera
as a game
which is life |
 xcrystalxrosesx 2006-09-10 . chapter 1absolutely stunning. I don't know what else to tell you. I love the format of this too and everything just flows so wonderfully. I am honestly totally jealous of your talent. :) definitely deserves a fav. |
 drippingdreams 2006-09-10 . chapter 1M m m m m , I love photography and poetry combining. One of the best artistic mixed drinks. I especially like the way it starts, and the title. Lovely words. |