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| you're love is life 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abusekeep writing. this reminded me of something my friend told me once, she probably found it somewhere else but it really made me think, "life is really meaningless; it's all about what you do after it, & the legacies you leave behind." your poem though said the opposite. of how after we die our memories fade, and when we're gone, the people we leave behind still do the same routines they would do any other day or time. but we can fly, finally free.now that i'm done rambling, i'd just like to say i really enjoyed your poem, and it obviously made me think and have a brain wave. congradulations, i dont get those many often, but when i do its pretty amazing. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseThat's sad. Keep writing. ~Anna~ |