 Boo 2009-07-25 . chapter 17 Its good but everything is moving to fast like your missing some chapters |
 Allanasha Ke Kiri 2009-05-29 . chapter 17This was cute. I really enjoyed it
Thanks |
 Sunny Opitmisum 2009-05-18 . chapter 17cuteness! =]
this story is adorable!! I |
 infinite.silence 2009-04-17 . chapter 17it was reallyy good (: |
 ladylookslikeadude 2009-04-14 . chapter 17I like it. |
 Dark Angel's Blue Fire 2009-04-03 . chapter 17This was really cute I enjoyed reading it! x |
 Stephan1013 2009-04-02 . chapter 1Alright, since I already reviewed on the last chapter, I have to review on this one.
My only comments are, brava on creating your own version of our High School. But I hate the fact, that there isn't a River, Chris, or Jake in our school.
[there probably is, but not to my knowledge]
But, to the fact...you make it seem like any gay man in Gavit is a social outcast. But I have to disagree, only from personal experience. The more open I was, the more known I became. The more 'friends' I made.
So, my question is. Was Jake open? Or was he just a horny playboy that didn't title himself? |
 Stephan1013 2009-04-01 . chapter 17Amazing!
I think this is by far my favorite story that I have read, period. Your description was flawless, obviously...it's you we are talking about. The story was fan-frikin-tastic!
You even had me empathizing within the story.
=]
Truly amazing. |
 10000trees 2009-03-19 . chapter 17aww this is an amazing story!
it's really well written, and it has a good plot too! :D
(on a side note, everyone who's gay at my school, is popular because they're gay, isn't that odd?) |
 Catseye*Rose 2009-03-19 . chapter 17That was such a cute ending! I like the jump ahead in time. And that couch thing just made me laugh XD This was an adorable story. |
 wistfulXdreams 2009-03-18 . chapter 17Aw. Nice ending. ;) |
 runaway sheet 2009-03-16 . chapter 17Aww.. what a cute update. THis couple IS rather cute.
Wow, what a fast forward. They're already done high school? What'd I miss?
Pretty cool and keep up the fast updates. I think the burning question is.. What kind of sandwich did they eat for lunch? Ehehe, Naw, I mean, Who is Kyle?
I really like that they've moved out of high school drama and into adult-ish ground - college. |
 JerryOnigiri 2009-03-16 . chapter 17Really cute story. Thanks for finishing it. |
 hairy-mushroom-nose 2009-03-16 . chapter 17Wow, did I miss something? Or is it just a major time jump or something? Or maybe I'm just being a retard (I should probably re-read the last few chapters, been a while since the last update!)
Cute couply chapter though. :P
xx |
 Miss Mysty 2009-03-06 . chapter 16I really like this story so far! The characters just really take you in, I think. And I feel sorry for Ms. Bellman :( I'll be looking forward to more! |