Reviews for An Italian Love Affair

disgusticified 2006-09-20 ch 1,	i like the poem. I just don't like the format. the way you have the lines separated ex. noises soon filter out/of my ears/and all that is left... that seems to disjointed. the words to this poem seem soft and loving, not harsh and broken. well.. try like this :: noises soon filter out of my ears,all that's left.. etc i hope that helps !
Ginny Rigby 2006-09-13 ch 1,	Wow...I never cease to find amazement in the splendor that one moment can bring, and how it can keep us going for years. You've captured that moment, when you're watching someone sleep knowing just how lucky you are to be feeling what you're feeling at that moment. This is beautiful.
jitsufreek 2006-09-10 ch 1,	Excellent job. I like the consistency of the phrasing and your capital-less format. It adds to the mood of your poem. Inspiring and eloquent language. Keep it up!