I absolutely LOVE ALL of the chapters, and have fallen completely 4 this story so I hope that u haven't 4gotten about this story, so I hope you update soon

can't wait for the next chapter

You really need to update it. I can't get enough. And you haven't updated in like, half a year, but hopefully you'll continue it? I hope so.

This is very good! The characters are well developed, and I like the story line. Please update soon!

Cheers

Whyler

Still loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :)

Hope to read more soon!

~Carm~

so where are they going to go..
update soon..interesting..

omg i am lovin this story
can't wait for more
all these vampires are popping up in the most unexpected places

I'm really likeing this story! I honestly can not wait for an update!

-Feria

okay, she's better now. But what's all this stuff about her being different after?

she's forgiven Erek already?

she dyes her hair red? That seems out of character. I have red hair and with it I stand out from the crowd. Taylor tries to be invisible so why does she dye her hair red?

Is Erek trying to steal her away from Anton?

come on, are there no truely large girls in her class / school to compare herself to? No basketball playing girls who are 5'9"? I admit I was heavy at that age but there were girls who were heavier than me. I'll bet all those other girls she has to deal with have eating disorders. ANd why isn't she mirror, scale obsessive?

I'm also thinking she might be anemic after feeding Anton. It takes a while to create new red cells (only 8 hours for white cells).

Good story so far. You may want to work on your paragraph breaks. I found one but I can't find it again. I'd love to have more visuals: facial expressions & body language, setting, etc.

hi sorry for the short review
So far I'm liking this a lot especially that for once the main character isn't one of them perfect types hehe

happy writing
ditte mai
denmark

Great story you have going. Can't wait for the next chapter! So just wondering how are the vampires able to go out in the daytime? Is it only that they can be out as long as they don't stand in direct sunlight, like as long as its overcast it's fine? Is Midori a vampire or something? Why was first Erek and then Anton surprised/kinda scared to see her? hehe I probably wont be getting an answer to those yet but asking never hurt anyone hehe well as long as it isn't the same thing over and over. Anyway enough rambling I guess.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter nightshade :)