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| Rin Is The Grudge Lady 2007-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseThe first thing that popped into my ead after I read this was "That's hot." I think I belong in an insane asylum... GOOD WORK THOUGH!! :-D |
| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseIt is like a nursery rhyme. And it's good. |
| call me ish 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseYes very nursry ryhme-esque (sp?? I really should learn to spell when im trying to use new words, oh well). Thats the first thing I thought of. This one made me smile too with the overly sarcastic tone of it. Can almost see the girl mocking this other person. You are seriously TALENTED! |
| dress her up in fairytales 2006-09-12 ch 1, | abuseshort but powerful. i can definitely relate. it always feels like that the first time. |
| MonsterGirl 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abusenice work =) interesting too and i like the tone |
| Guardrail 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abuseNot quite like a nursery rhyme, but I like it. Great work and definatley keep writing. And thanks for your review! |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abuseDude, you terrify me... Especially since I know you... I should sneak up on you one time and see what you do. =D |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, and vivid. Good sound and tone. Well written. |
| Reborn As I 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseheh heh heh... |
| i.am.the.winter 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abusehaunting...nice job. :) -- devil in a midnight mass |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuselol, it is funny, but serious and concerning at the same time. Great work! Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |