Hey again. My review day. I try to take one day a week to review going top to botoom on who reviewed me(it takes a while) I really like it but there was a couple of lines i thought might need a little more add on like just adding a but would do it. Lines 7(but), 9 (but) just a suggest for who knows i could be reading wrong. Thats been known to happen.

Great job.

Mandi(loversdream17)

Cool. Well done, and keep writing!

Anna _